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One day, one 9 year old boy named Phil went to a summer camp, but there is something weird about it. there isn't one boy in sight. Phil went to go investigate what it really is, but a counciler stopped Phil in his tracks "what are you doing out here dressed like that? you need to be nude" the woman said. Phil said "sorry" and walked to his cabin, which has a girl named Sam in it. Phil asked "sam, do you have any extra female camp clothes for me to wear?". Sam nodded and gave Phil a pink pair of panties, a camp skirt and a camp shirt. Phil put it on, but quickly took it off due to a burning on his chest. Phil Asked "Sam, are these clothes magic?" and scratched at his cock. Sam said "no, maybe because your the only boy in Cheerleading camp. Phil said "cheerleading camp?! I thought this was Science camp" and looked in a mirror, noticing that he is as slender as a girl. "Sam, whats happening to me?" he said, not noticing that his voice is girly. Sam said "your turning into a girl, thats an affect of wearing girl clothes". Phil freaked out and felt his crotch, but found a female clit. "guess I'm a girl now" he said, finishing the changes into a girl. Phil ran outside naked and went over to a fox. the fox got scared and bit Phil before running off. Phil's hands turned into paws while she sprouts a fox tail covered in red fur. Phil's changes finish up quickly, leaving her a vixen. THE END
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Ultranova53 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
?????
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DemonBrothers Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
Alright, to save you some words:

Boy goes to cheer-leading camp thinking it's science camp.

Boy puts on woman clothes.

Boy becomes a woman.

Boy runs into a fox and then becomes a vixen-lady.

...Yes, you can imagine just how good this is...
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DemonBrothers Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014
....Also, I may add, why does he even ask for girl clothes if he still thought he was in science camp when he asked that? In fact, why does he even ask for female clothes at all?! There was no indication that he needed girls' clothes, and all the counselor said was that he needed to be nude! And why would he still think it's science camp if they ask him to be nude? And why is he wearing girls' clothes, then he's naked? It doesn't even stay constant! And why doesn't the counselor do what a counselor is supposed to do when someone goes to camp? What was it... Oh yeah, introductions! They usually do that, you know! Not only do those not make sense, but the spelling and grammatical errors are sad. This is... poor...

...Oh yeah, and also, and these include the small fixes that should be done with the words and grammar, "Sam, are these clothes magic?" "No, maybe because your the only boy in Cheerleading camp."  But then, "Your (May I add it's supposed to be "you're"?) turning into a girl, that's an affect of wearing girl clothes" What even-
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bluedragoon345 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student General Artist
cool
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Zaedis Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Second worst story I've read but not as bad as the first worst story I've read.
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QuinceyandMoocher Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
De fuk I just read?
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bugman13 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
Worst tf i have ever read
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TransformationGalore Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
wthplz did I just read.
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Spot25Starr Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
WTF?

:o
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werewolfwill Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011
Phil you have a rare disease called stupiditus their is only one cure get into my mouth:)
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snowfoxgirl Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010
hey good story but you should be more specific like she sprouts a fox tail and ears covered in red fur that would be better i love foxes and foxgirls i wish i was a foxgirl you know half girl half fox i love transformations into foxgirls
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c0nmast3r Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2010
1. How is this in the horror section?

2. Improve your quantity.

3. What's with your manner? Quoting "Scratched his cock"

4. How does a guy turn into a woman for wearing their clothes?

5. Add more reaction after the TF.
Say if they just turned into a girl, Wouldn't a guy be honestly mouth less?

I have more criticism but I'll save it..
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Aegis27 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009
A little short....
O.K, a lot short
Sorry mate
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Animeboye Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2008  Student
Not bad but there are some things that are bothering me.

1.I find it kind of strange that Phil would willingly wear girl clothes, even if it is a girl camp. And especially for a nine year old kid. Most 9 year old boys probably wouldn't even think of wearing something such as a skirt. Is Phil into that by any chance? I know it's weird asking that about a kid but you never know.

2. The character's reaction to his/her change. It seems pretty weird that he'd accept becoming a girl that quickly if at all. I just kind of think he'd be more freaked out about becoming a girl/vixen thing.Pretty much every TF story I've read(even ones made by starting writers) has their character in a state of shock or disbelief. Yet Phil accepts it just like that. No fear, nothing.

3.What happens after he/she's done changing. One of my favorite parts of TF stories is the character's reaction after their transformation. I'd have liked to see Phil's reaction to being a girl-fox. Does he become one of them? Is he their mascot? These are the kinds of things that make the reader want to read more of your work. Don't be afraid to continue after the character's transformation has ended.

I agree with stealth on being more descrptive with your TFs. Check out stories written by other Tf writers if you need to and get a feel for how they describe their character's TFs.

Again this isn't a bad story. It's actually pretty cool. To be honest, I'd be intrested in seeing a sequel or even a remake to this story. It's got potential and left some roon open for a possible sequel.
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superblahhead Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
what im wondering is why he willingly gets nude in public everytime someone asks him to
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zed1234567 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2009
good paoint it waas to also to
short
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stealth1525 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2008
good for beginners but heres some advice, descrice all transformations in detail and dont be afraid to use paragraphs. keep up the good work
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tmanstheman Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008
9,was it 15,and 18 years but good storys .
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legendaryabyss Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
9 years old dude...?

I hope that's a typo...
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